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July 3, 2011
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chi no namida by x3uu chi no namida by x3uu
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really nice work!
well if u want critique i'll do my best to give a good and constructive one.
Well, lets see...

The composition is simply great, the usage of both, color and composition are
seductively used resulting in a really dinamic and powerfull constructed piece.

In fact the reslt is so great that tiny things comes to the front really notoriously because of the great accomplishment on the rest.
For example the sword, in contrast with the rest of the piece, the sword ist's just not at the same level. Sasuke's lef arm looks a little shorter wich makes his hand look like its not posing on the water completly but only the tip of the fingers and also the hand looks too big by contrast.
And finally the left foot also lacks the graphical result of the rest of the piece.

I wana clarify that i put all my attention trying to find any errors or details.

The piece is just greate and like i said, i made an effort to find something to give a constructive critique.

*long time without writing in english so i apologize in advance for spelling mistakes*

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Excellent artwork. I will divide this critique intro three different subjects.

1.- Drawing: Your drawing skills are impressive, however, I agree with the arm issue, which doesn't fits correctly in the angle you used.

2.- Colouring: Really impressve, vibrant, the saturated tones really fit the overall expression. maybe the lightnings in the sword would be more synthetic.

Vision and layout: The overall layout, angle and expressión is very good. The rendering work is excellent, resembling a dramatic situation like those found in the manga.

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ExcellentAdventures Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great detail and expression!
uh...i normally dislike sasuke, but this fanart is impressive.
Nice pose and his skin is colored well.
prinz59 May 17, 2012  Hobbyist
it seems the sword is through the should and arm, a bit blood in the lower portion of the sword would make it clear. but migth i just dont see it well enough. but nicely done
ilumpruj May 16, 2012  Student General Artist
nicely done
Ayayue May 15, 2012  Student General Artist
You have been featured! :aww: [link]
Nageko-san May 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Uzgurugalo May 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Nicely done
pritthish May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
japanese phantom of the opera? :P amazing colouring job :)
It's really good! So dramatic! The way you've designed Sasuke's face makes me think of Phantom of the Opera.
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